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0xcauliflower's avatar

At the meet-up, I tried to give you some constructive criticism, and I bungled it. But this piece includes an example of what I meant. In this piece, the parentheticals work like grace notes. They make the sentences' rhythms vary, without making things less clear. You're still speaking plainly, but the style is a little more 'catchy.' Maybe you have always been doing this, though, and I am just a bad reader...

I am desperate to read this book! Everything I have learned about agents (Wylie, Ellen Levine, so on) has felt like occult knowledge. It does not surprise me things are so stratified: power laws strike again!

I don't recall where I read it, but there was an interesting profile of Sally Rooney which described her quest to get Wylie, iirc, to represent her. Zadie Smith has described Rooney as, above anything else, "steely." Smith also said this was the most important trait to have as a writer. With only 25 gatekeepers to prestige, that makes sense.

On The Program Era: I didn't share your sense that McGurl thinks MFA fiction is bad, or homogenizing. I think he wrote the book to refute this assumption. I think he is ambivalent. He ends the book, if I remember correctly, with a question: "how can we not be grateful?"

If you haven't, I would recommend After the Program Era. It is an edited volume, responding to the Program Era. There is a great essay about the job market for MFAs by Julianna Spahr, and an interesting look about the Gordon Lish school of fiction.

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Publishing a book can be really hard. That is why Amazon has direct Kindle publishing as an alternative. Now that is just like a drip of water into an ocean. I always wanted to work in publishing on the inside. I reviewed books for a long time and never got noticed.

Good writing can only be read if you know where to find it. I was an English major and know the basics of writing , good writing in science is harder. Fiction is judged narrowly. I am optimistic with a large splash of pessimistic. I have not sold anything except for $5 and medium has yet to pay me.

Marketing is hard for some people and comes naturally to others.

There is good writing and there is luck. Luck comes to those who never give up like so many authors. They know people, if you write something good, you are expected to write something else good. Deadlines and pressures can lead to drinking. There are walss of rejection letters.

Octavia Butler was like this. I am writing to survive my layoff and I have some money. Life can hard for an author.

I feel insignficant but I still write. Someday...

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