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John Julius Reel's avatar

I like this point: "the book could’ve had more respect for the reader’s time." I think a lot of books fall into this category. I remember trying to read Bret Easton Ellis's American Psycho when it first came out and not being able to finish it, because it was just page after page of the same. I tried again years later with the same result. As you say about The Sleepers, the book stopped surprising me. All the same, it's become a kind of literary landmark, representing a generation and a time. Perhaps The Sleepers, as certain reviewers predict, will have the same relatively long life. The book has certainly got people talking. Thanks for the review.

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Naomi Kanakia's avatar

I like your comment, but I will say, I am very fond of American Psycho! Admittedly I listened to it in audiobook, where I feel like sometimes tangents and asides are less annoying

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John Julius Reel's avatar

A lot of people love the book. I should try listening to it.

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Danny Sullivan's avatar

I recently watched Bunuel’s film The Discreet Charm of the Bourgeoisie, which is hostile art that subjects you to two hours of the absolute nothing of six boring characters exchanging banalities. The point being that they’re boring.

Bunuel laughs in his audience’s face, “Haha you thought I was going to give you a movie, you thought I had something to say. You rubes, you absolute morons. You sat through this for nothing.”

It’s just a totally facile stunt. Art whose whole point is to say nothing is just, it’s just not a point worth making.

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Naomi Kanakia's avatar

Now I kind of want to experience this movie.

In this case, I don't know if it's meant to be an assault on the reader: I think this book feels is in on the joke. That's why it works--the reader also feels superior to Dan, Eliza, and Mariko. I just question whether that feeling can sustain an entire book.

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Danny Sullivan's avatar

I saw it in the theater, which is the ideal way to experience it--no breaks, no phone. I have a high tolerance for boring movies (love Ozu etc) but by the last twenty minutes I was rocking back and forth in my seat and grabbing my head in agony. I first described it as claustrophobia cinema.

You're right the comparison doesn't quite track. I think when I commented I was reacting mostly to the dialogue you quoted, which out of context anyway, man, I don't think I could have made it through a whole book of that.

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Naomi Kanakia's avatar

It's better in context, but...yeah.

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Mary Jane Eyre's avatar

I mentioned your critique of Lasch in a piece I wrote about The Sleepers - I had exactly the same thought!

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Naomi Kanakia's avatar

Excited to read it!

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John Encaustum's avatar

Thanks, this is a very helpful review that finally addresses some concerns I had hoped others would consider earlier. This particularly stood out to me as important information:

>But it’s also just very clear from the resulting scene that this is exactly what he’s thinking. The two of them are in perfect harmony; they fully understand each others’ desires and positions.

>As a result of this complete understanding that exists between Dan / Eliza and Dan / Mariko, the dialogue tends to take on a very stilted quality. It’s extremely on the nose: every conversation has some purpose, and they talk exactly to the point.

This is a pattern that grates on me in grimdark fantasy as well, where it's common, and I have been unable to ignore it ever since RS Bakker's Prince of Nothing series skewered it (and flat-out symbolically crucified it, in a climactic scene that ranks among the most existentially horrifying I've read in fiction). The crucial issue for me as a reader is that when people with hearts actually understand each other well, they don't find it hard to break these Lasch-type patterns.

I can't suspend disbelief that people would actually be so correct about one another and still be so helplessly adrift. Instead, the believable narratives incorporating this pattern are those like Julian Barnes's The Sense of an Ending where the helpless omniscience in the narrator is a delusion that depends crucially on the narrator's isolation. I plan to read The Sleepers, but I'm concerned that I'm going to find Gasda is writing well from inside a miserable delusion rather than describing it well and wisely from outside.

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Naomi Kanakia's avatar

That's really astute. I agree that if people understand each other so well, then they probably wouldn't be so trapped! And if they're trapped and helpless, it's probably in part because they lack understanding

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M Smith's avatar

Mmm. My life is kinda like this. I'm a xanax and two pinot gris's into a standard evening of my mid-life depression, so a little slow; but I adored Lasch about a decade ago. And the reactionary think pieces and - what is the non-fiction version of a novella? - extended essays like Kristin Dombek's 'Selfishness of others'. All great as popular non-fiction, but lacking a superego, means lacking 'character' and all the things that pertain to 'a' character; which can be a challenge for the character driven form.

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Naomi Kanakia's avatar

I was fond of Lasch as well. Just question how well his diagnoses apply to myself and to people I actually know. Obviously they're an extremely good description of all kinds of people I dislike and don't know--but those people are somewhat immaterial to my day-to-day life.

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Ella Schmidt's avatar

A thoughtful, measured review from a writer I've come to trust to have a finger on the pulse of new lit, alt lit, bad lit, good lit -- without ever pigeonholing or making those broadstrokes characterizations. Always admire your sophistication and attentiveness. (I also appreciate you linking to my review!)

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Naomi Kanakia's avatar

Thank you! This means a lot. I've enjoyed doing these front-list reviews, and I really love being a part of the broader discussion about all these books.

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Buku Sarkar's avatar

Sometimes I feel this is a consequence of trying to emulate the 19th c European fiction and late Russian lit too which are very dialogue heavy in their approach.

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St. Jerome Powell's avatar

Surely you mean 19th c? There aren’t that many important 18th century novels.

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Buku Sarkar's avatar

I could never finish anything written before 19c. Chaycer and Beowulf did my head in. Apologies I am typos galore with no energy to hit backspace so often

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Buku Sarkar's avatar

Sorry iPhone and tremor problems with hands. Yes 19th c European fiction.

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Trey Hinkle's avatar

Been waiting for this!

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Contarini's avatar

Thanks for this.

About halfway through it.

I’m enjoying it.

I keep chuckling at things.

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Naomi Kanakia's avatar

Thank you!

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Gregor's avatar

If you're sniffling in the spring, you probably have allergies. If a piece of contemporary fiction doesn't work, it's probably just bad writing. Sometimes the most obvious diagnosis is also the right one.

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La Chasse au bonheur's avatar

It seems a great irony, one of many, that, after finishing The Dead, we may weep for Gabriel and Greta and all the rest (Eveline earlier haunts me more than any Dubliner). We lament Joyce's judgment on them. We care for those characters. We want to say you've been asleep, wake up. You can save yourself, country, etc. The Sleepers are truly dead. We want to see them buried, silenced; to nail their coffins shut.

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David Null's avatar

I like books where the characters talk drunk and high

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Alex-GPT's avatar

this is really well done criticism

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Naomi Kanakia's avatar

Thank you!

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Kit Noussis's avatar

I like that veiled, covert quality you highlight in the play. It would be nice to see such a play live.

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Naomi Kanakia's avatar

I know! I'd love to see some of Gasda's plays in person. Something to think about when next I'm in NYC.

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