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Misc's avatar

What a wonderful story. I read your Conan essay and I guess on some level I was itching to read this kind of story - great follow-up!

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Caleb Reed's avatar

I love how the emotional center of this scene shifts in an instant — from confrontation to something much more complex. It isn’t a simple surrender or reconciliation, but a reframing of power and choice that makes the release feel earned. Those moments are the ones that stick.

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Marian Kechlibar's avatar

Hanged. Coats are hung, people are hanged.

My pet peeve.

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Jane Saunte's avatar

Homage to Conan the Barbarian, and a strong flavour of Shirley Jackson, particularly the opening sentence! Was that a subconscious nod?

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