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Gautam Bhatia's avatar

Loved this. Such a delicious twist at the end.

Will's avatar

What a fantastic read! Really enjoyed that

Chandler Klang Smith's avatar

Wow, you really crushed it with this one. Love love love.

David Roberts's avatar

Well done, Naomi.

Contarini's avatar

“I have shelves of them.”

Hilarious.

Good story.

Abra McAndrew's avatar

Very O. Henry for the 21st century meets Overlocked. I like it. Also like starting a post with “Oftentimes.” I can just hear that word in your voice.

Joshua Porter's avatar

What a great book cover.

Bosquet's avatar

Hola , Buen Relato. Me Gusto Especialmente Éstas Frases:" Tener relaciones sexuales era un esfuerzo de equipo (pensaba él). Pero su esposa no estaba necesariamente en la misma sintonía: ella sentía que el ímpetu dependía de él para ponerla de humor. ". Un Saludo.