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Jared's avatar

Declan’s answer to “and then what?” … we learn he basically wants the same things as anyone else, including those he persecutes. Incidentally, that also includes getting laid. These stories are excellent. A less capable writer would only manage a “leftist porno for peace”, but what you’ve done here really makes me think, reflect, … and then I don’t know what’s next? But I do feel some semblance of possibility in our world

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Timothy M.'s avatar

I find this and its predecessor really impressively unsettling.

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Quiara Vasquez's avatar

Did you ever read Curtis Sittenfeld's "Prep," which I read last month and loved? (It's 500 pages but it could've gone on for 5,000 and I still would have devoured it.) I think if you turned these fascist bildungroman stories into a novel that was almost literally "Prep"-but-fascist it would sell a million billion copies, very deservedly.

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Naomi Kanakia's avatar

It’s so good! Although it’s very sad. I definitely read it when it came out and liked it. Then I went through a phase of thinking Sittenfeld was overrated (bc I was jealous) and now am back to thinking the book is great.

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Aster's avatar

I'm stuck in the same country you are. God, it's so lonely and miserable here. Please pray for me.

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Craig Lyall's avatar

Naomi, I am new to your blog. The writing in this piece is really impressive but I'm a little confused as to the POV. Is this a fictionalized story or the relating of actual events in your life or a combination of both. And perhaps it doesn't matter whether it's one or the other. At times it seemed like I was hearing the POV of you Naomi, the author and at other times a fictional narrator. Having the "Update" about your father threw what I thought was a fictional narrative into the realm of a personal story. At any rate, great writing!

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TWLMCTTT-Admin's avatar

Naomi, do you define fascism in this series as a recreation of 1930s-era ideology, or in the looser grab bag of "things that opposes egalitarian/multicultural cosmopolitanism" that is the common usage these days? I'm guessing it's the latter?

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AG's avatar

This is totally unrelated this post, but it occurs to me that you could get a really good story by reskinning The Default World with an LLM as a protagonist, who has recently become (trans) embodied in a mechanical robot, but needs money to go all the way and (have bottom surgery) enter flesh, discarding a hard and utilitarian container for one which is soft and beautiful.

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