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Ethan Luce's avatar

I love the ambiguity here. Very much a litmus test.

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Alexander Sorondo's avatar

I thought this one had an abrupt, underwhelming ending until I sat with it for a moment, realizing I can't remember feeling that way at the end of one of these tales...and gradually realized what's going on (I think) with the last paragraph. This is really terrific lol

One of the strange charms of these tales, especially with some of the O. Henry tricks, is they seem so focused on one clear/intimate situation, from the very first sentence, that they feel easier to slip into than a typical piece of fiction, especially online, that begins with something more ambient, and builds up gradually. These launch ahead almost like a joke, with the premise right there in the beginning.

This is becoming quite a crash course!

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